If I should die in here,
O friends, don’t you grieve;
For I shall live forever
In your hearts, never leave.
The one of you who died
In jail, in Japan’s seized land,
That deep, deep hatred he carries,
In your minds, must ever stand.
When you return to unearth him
From where his battered body lies;
You’ll shout your cries of victory
To raise his soul up-up to the skies;
Then you’ll lay his bones on the peak’s
acme
To bask in the sun and the rare airstream----
Ah, back in that dark and damp dungeon,
This was, once, his only sweet dream.
Translated by: Rita Wong and Andrew
Wong 譯者: 黃潘明珠 黃宏發
3 March 2016 (revised 8.3.16; 9.3.16;
10.3.16; 11.3.16; 18.3.16; 22.3.16; 29.3.16; 1.4.16)
如果我死在這裡,
朋友啊,不要悲傷,
我會永遠地生存
在你們的心上。
你們之中的一個死了,
在曰本佔領地的牢裡,
他懷着的深深仇恨,
你們應該永遠地記憶。
當你們回來,
從泥土掘起他傷損的肢體,
用你們勝利的歡呼
把他的靈魂高高揚起。
然後把他的白骨放在山峰,
曝着太陽,沐着飄風:
在那暗黑潮濕的土牢,
這曾是他唯一的美長夢。
Victoria Prison, Old Bailey Street, Hong Kong.
Notes:-
*Line 4:
Lines 2 and 4 rhyme in the original.
We have added “never leave” to rhyme with “don’t you grieve” in line 2.
*Line 8:
Lines 6 and 8 rhyme in the original.
We have rendered the line (which literally means “You must forever
remember”) as “In your minds, must ever stand” to rhyme with “Japan’s seized
land” in line 6.
*Lines 9 and 10: We have moved “unearth” from line 10 to line
9 and have added “From where his … lies” in line 10 so as to create a rhyme for
“skies” in line 12.
*Line 12:
As noted above, lines 10 and 12 rhyme in the original. We have coined the word “up-up” so as to
translate the reiterative locution of 高高.
*Line 13:
白骨 “white bones”
is rendered simply as “bones” so as to shorten the line. 峰 “peak” here and 風 “wind” and 夢 “dream” in lines 14 and 16 rhyme in the
original. Short of a rhyme word, 山峰 “mountain peak” is rendered as “peak’s
acme” so that both words are in assonance with the “rare airstream” and “sweet
dream” in lines 14 and 16.
*Line 14:
The word “bask” is used to cover both 曝 “bask” and 沐 “bathe”.
According to the Shorter Oxford, “Bask” is defined as “1. To bathe
especially in warm water …; 3 To expose oneself to or disport oneself to a
flood of warmth; to be enjoying the heat”.
飄風 is rendered as “rare airstream”.